trembling fingers
unwrapping the straw mat
for the last time

11 comments on “Unwrapping

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    so many possibilities wrapped in the puzzlement of the haiku; it will tae a thousand reads to find the most satisfactory

    much love…

  2. wonderfully done! Lots of possibilities.

  3. Bastet says:

    very mysterious in my opinion .. and a lovely ku to reflect upon trying to resolve it!

  4. Mysterious but also emotional…

  5. The mystery here open up to almost everything or nothing.

  6. Whatever the answer to the riddle, I fear it’s a sad one.

  7. vyomimalik says:

    Wow! Lovely! So many possibilities!

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