11 comments on “Clouds

  1. Wonderful humour there, and vivid imagery.

  2. Jen says:

    This brought a smile — very good!!! ūüôā

  3. thotpurge says:

    Hah! Really good!!

  4. Very nice! left me smiling.

  5. Bastet says:

    lol – nicely said.

  6. With your haiku you have added another nice story to the clouds of Kansas.

  7. lynn__ says:

    The contrast between our fantasy and the reality can be humorous ūüėČ

  8. kaykuala h says:

    Yes, just knock the wind off their sails! That should put the perspective right!


  9. Cathy Tenzo says:

    This is delightful!

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