toward a stand of pines
three raven feathers drifting
drifting in the wind


8 comments on “Drifting

  1. Nonnie says:

    I like the gracefulness I’m picturing of the feathers drifting…

  2. very nice, I like the repetitiveness.

  3. three raven feathers…what was that raven up to, I wonder 🙂

  4. gillena says:

    luv the rhythm created by the repetition

    much love…

  5. Jen says:

    An interesting story suggested in this haiku 🙂

  6. janicead says:

    A nicely penned mystery.

  7. Feathers drifting on the wind …. wow …. what a scene. Nice repetition.

  8. Bastet says:

    Beautiful image …. and I agree the repetition created a great atmosphere.

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