Drifting Jun22 by Mark M. Redfearn toward a stand of pines three raven feathers drifting drifting in the wind Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Constellations Journal → 8 comments on “Drifting” Nonnie says: June 22, 2015 at 12:24 pm I like the gracefulness I’m picturing of the feathers drifting… Reply adaspoetryalcove says: June 22, 2015 at 2:32 pm very nice, I like the repetitiveness. Reply Tournesol (Clr) says: June 22, 2015 at 5:49 pm three raven feathers…what was that raven up to, I wonder 🙂 Reply gillena says: June 22, 2015 at 7:34 pm luv the rhythm created by the repetition much love… Reply Jen says: June 23, 2015 at 12:32 am An interesting story suggested in this haiku 🙂 Reply janicead says: June 23, 2015 at 3:12 pm A nicely penned mystery. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: June 26, 2015 at 2:40 am Feathers drifting on the wind …. wow …. what a scene. Nice repetition. Reply Bastet says: June 27, 2015 at 12:23 am Beautiful image …. and I agree the repetition created a great atmosphere. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.