10 comments on “Field”

  1. Nonnie USA says:
    July 23, 2015 at 11:21 am

    add mine to that of the wren! I like the use of keening- unusual to see it in modern poems.

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  2. mandy91040 says:
    July 23, 2015 at 11:25 am

    ah yes how to keep the birds from the berries?

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  3. doveinthedungeon says:
    July 23, 2015 at 2:55 pm

    Lovely, achy sadness to this one —

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  4. Candy says:
    July 23, 2015 at 6:02 pm

    you get a sence of loss in this. Nice!

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  5. Tournesol (Clr) says:
    July 23, 2015 at 6:38 pm

    Oh I love that word “keening” but sad for the frost:(

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  6. Dancing Echoes says:
    July 23, 2015 at 6:57 pm

    This is beautiful!

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  7. Bastet says:
    July 24, 2015 at 1:52 am

    At this moment … I would gladly see frost on the strawberry field …

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  8. adaspoetryalcove says:
    July 24, 2015 at 3:42 am

    Beautifully done!

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