Flattened

 
 
 


leaking its fragrance
 
a lily of the valley
 
flattened by the storm

Advertisements

14 comments on “Flattened

  1. rebecca says:

    even in death-this lily strives to give.

  2. That must be a powerful fragrance. 🙂

  3. artmusedog says:

    very creative haiku with the lily of the valley surviving the storm ~ metaphor for life!

    happy weekend coming to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  4. gemma says:

    Grace lingers here.

  5. Lea says:

    A prayer of sorts, or the spirit of that flower flowing to the heavens…

  6. J C says:

    Oh, so sad it got flattened. But if it’s leaking, it is bring pleasure. Hopefully it will come back. This must be lily season because I’ve read several messages today about them. re foolish me…he moved and I think he let it die in the pot. I hope you got some of that rain.

  7. Jen says:

    This brings back a childhood memory … nicely done, Mark

  8. Bastet says:

    wow .. must have been quite a storm!

  9. gillena says:

    exquisite; have a nice weekend Mark

    much love…

  10. so true – death leaves a memory that cannot be taken away

  11. janicead says:

    Love the opening line! a real gotcha.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s