With an eager hand
she grabs for the yellow rose,
only to draw back.


8 comments on “Grabs

  1. Rall says:

    Nice gels don’t grab at anything…Tsk! 🙂

  2. Candy says:

    ouch! nice one.

  3. Wow a classic ! the last line is a mind catcher !

  4. Jen says:

    Hm…. so many questions raised! Very good.

  5. Beauty always hides a few thorns just under the surface. Nice!

  6. Alice Keys says:

    What a fun metaphor. It leaves me wanting the rest of the story.

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