unexpected gust
driving the boy’s paper boat
off course forever


12 comments on “Gust

  1. Oh how sad! The ‘forever’ has such a finality to it. 🙂

  2. rebecca says:

    gosh. i think that same gust paid an uninvited visit to my life too.

  3. Lea says:

    I too… feel as if I am that paper boat…

  4. Oh! Sometimes this word “forever” is so painful..

  5. J C says:

    think of the adventures that little boat will find, and the boy can dream.

  6. Nonnie USA says:

    oh, how disappointing!

  7. gillena says:

    a boat without its boy, that’s a sad adventure

    have a nice Saturday

    much love…

  8. Jen says:

    perfectly captured scene … I feel so bad for the little boy!
    could also be a great metaphor. sigh.

  9. to the boy that is the biggest storm he’ll face. Fantastic Mark!

  10. Rall says:

    A single unexpected event can do that.

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