a gap in the wall
of an old mountain cabin
stuffed with raven’s cry
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Gap
a gap in the wall
of an old mountain cabin
stuffed with raven’s cry
Mark M. Redfearn 
I’ve never heard of raven’s cry … nice twist!
Mysterious and haunting, i think.
What a great image!
eerie, nice one, Mark.
I first thought this was sad but then, maybe they are cries of spirits…
They are whatever you would like them to be! 😉
On Fri, Aug 21, 2015 at 2:16 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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🙂 well if I reread it at Halloween it will be ghosts. I added your “how long” haiku with your credits linking to your blog, along with Basho and Chèvrefeuille on my post…if it’s not okay, let me know.
It’s fine. I’m honored. Thank you (and I guess you’ll just have to wait for Halloween to roll around!).
On Fri, Aug 21, 2015 at 2:47 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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Nice haiku Mark … a little bit scary, but that’s maybe the Raven’s name.