Past the garden gate
a spiderweb in tatters
flutters in the wind.


11 comments on “Farewell

  1. Poignantly written, Mark. I felt some sadness! 🙂 Life can be in tatters you know.

  2. Kathy Combs says:

    Love the imagery you captured with your words. Nice!

  3. Archana Kapoor says:

    amazing imagery 🙂

  4. janicead says:

    This is quite lovely, Mark.

  5. !2 words that say so much, Brilliant.

    Visit Keith’s Ramblings!

  6. lynn__ says:

    The title explains the moment …and “tatters” clinches the mood!

  7. Alice Keys says:

    Beautiful imagery. This swept me away for an instant. You captured true haiku spirit.

  8. Old Egg says:

    Only the spider carries her building blocks with her. We have much more work to do.

  9. Apurva says:

    this is beautifully done 🙂

  10. jazzytower says:

    Fluttering in the wind. .I’very been there. Nice one.

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