stumbling over stones
while seeking Capricornus
on a windy night


19 comments on “Stumbling

  1. gemma says:

    I try not to walk over stones on a windy night. It’s hard enough by calm daylight.

  2. gemma says:

    Then again Capricornus isn’t visible during the day.

    • Yeah, that’s a problem for those of us who have night vision that’s not quite what it used to be. Why can’t those darned constellations show themselves in the daytime? 😉

      On Fri, Sep 4, 2015 at 8:37 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:


  3. J C says:

    Keep your eyes to the sky and your imagination will fly…and your feet too. 🙂

  4. Cathy says:

    I’ve walked into the side of a building looking up at the stars…very embarrassing. Great haiku! Have a wonderful weekend!

  5. artmusedog says:

    Delightful haiku ~ it was windy here last night and have been walking over stones to get to the beach ~ thus I can feel your words perfectly ~ thanks,

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  6. I’ve been there…or think I have…

  7. Paloma says:

    A story in a 3 line moment — wonderful!

  8. Annie says:

    Opening a book
    Discover capricornus
    In the daytime’s light

  9. Wish the stars were visible. Love this.

  10. Lea says:

    Your haiku makes me think that the stones have become the stars… what an image of walking in the night sky…

  11. Well done … must have been an adventure to find Capricorn

  12. rebecca says:

    stones into stars-
    YES!!! then we could stumble on star dust!

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