before the cranes fly
gleaning every stray rice grain
from harvested fields


13 comments on “Cranes

  1. Oliana says:

    What an image!! you say so much here and preparing for fall.

  2. Alice Keys says:

    This sounds like the rice fields of California. Well done.

  3. Archana Kapoor says:

    fabulous imagery 🙂

  4. A bit like our corporate world….

  5. Loved the imagery you created with this one!

  6. Bastet says:

    Ah … they need to fuel up don’t they!

  7. The cranes get their food and the farm is cleaned up. Helps the farmer.a beautiful imagery seen in your haiku.

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