plastic water bowl
cradling autumn’s first full moon—
old dog drinks his fill
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Bowl
plastic water bowl
cradling autumn’s first full moon—
old dog drinks his fill
Mark M. Redfearn 
This one is very classical … reminds me of Issa.
I rather like it too. Thanks, Bastet!
On Sun, Nov 22, 2015 at 1:08 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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Rightly so … a good one!
Wonderful haiku…miss my old dog!
Do you miss the moon too? 😉
On Sun, Nov 22, 2015 at 8:27 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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I admired her bright face just last night!
Echoing Bastet — this has a great Issa feel 🙂
Except Issa knew nothing of plastic! 😉
On Mon, Nov 23, 2015 at 5:54 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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true, true .. but if he lived today I think he’d be a sort of hand-me-down-mismatched-tupperware sorta guy. 😉
You know what? I think you’re absolutely right!
On Tue, Nov 24, 2015 at 12:20 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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