three yellow onions
shift in a wicker basket—
temblor six-point-oh


11 comments on “Temblor

  1. Cathy says:

    A most visual haiku. I can also see the beautifully battered onion rings waiting to be deep fried. You caused my imagination to run wild. Have a grand weekend.

  2. Oh I hope you have not drawn these words from reality.

    • Made-up words—this time. Someday, though, the Big One will hit SoCal and onions everywhere will feel the shock. 🙂

      On Fri, Jun 8, 2018 at 7:42 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:


  3. Strong haiku ~ emanating aromas of onions ~

    Happy Weekend to you,
    ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor

  4. Lea says:

    Such shifts, the layers of the onion peel… and the road home, is never the same…

    • Peel the onion, take the road less traveled…things change, and we hope that change comes to us gracefully, not cataclysmically.

      On Fri, Jun 8, 2018 at 9:06 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:


  5. gemma says:

    Even the Arizona onions felt that.

  6. gillena says:

    Hope you are safe. Have a good Sunday Mark


  7. rebecca says:

    a feeling that can never be forgotten.

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