7 comments on “

  1. Cathy says:

    Aw, determination and perseverance. I saw a lot of that last week in the birds we fed. Have a grand weekend!

  2. Gillena Cox says:

    Get home he must. nice one m

    much love…

  3. JC says:

    I love most every haiku you write Mark. Each one transports me to within the words, within the scene. Here, I feel the rain, know its a cold rain because its winter, I know the sky is darkening because its evening, and I know the bird is intent to do what birds do at that time of day. All this I feel.

  4. Lea says:

    Sleek bird, almost becomes water himself…

  5. Marit says:

    I can relate to the bird… I am always bent to get home too, whatever the weather is… love your haiku Mark!

  6. Smart black bird ~ I too can relate to the bird ~ thanks, ^_^

    Living moment by moment,

    A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

  7. rebecca says:

    you painted a compelling story. it could be every ones; the power and comfort of returning home.

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