Winter evening rain—
a blackbird keeps on flying,
bent on getting home.
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Winter evening rain—
a blackbird keeps on flying,
bent on getting home.
Mark M. Redfearn 
Aw, determination and perseverance. I saw a lot of that last week in the birds we fed. Have a grand weekend!
Get home he must. nice one m
Mark
much love…
I love most every haiku you write Mark. Each one transports me to within the words, within the scene. Here, I feel the rain, know its a cold rain because its winter, I know the sky is darkening because its evening, and I know the bird is intent to do what birds do at that time of day. All this I feel.
Sleek bird, almost becomes water himself…
I can relate to the bird… I am always bent to get home too, whatever the weather is… love your haiku Mark!
Smart black bird ~ I too can relate to the bird ~ thanks, ^_^
Living moment by moment,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
you painted a compelling story. it could be every ones; the power and comfort of returning home.