My words are embers,
waiting to burst into flame
and devour your heart.
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Embers
My words are embers,
waiting to burst into flame
and devour your heart.
Mark M. Redfearn 
You always have a unique way of interpret a word. I love it.
Wow… so powerful and full of passion, terrific!
ravishing!
your haiku is filled with so much passion.. wonderful.
So romantic!
Wow, powerful. Could be so romantic, but then again, it could just as easily be Goebbels Epitaph.
Words have such power for good and evil.
Thank you 🙂
Awesome!
Amazing Mark, as Bjorn already said … you have always such a different way to write a haiku on the given prompt and this one is again a beauty … passionate words … waiting to be said to the one you love.
Wow! Real passion there…and yes, a unique style!
A dramatic performance of words spinning dynamic images! Beautiful!
keep talking!
simplicity of words making it close to heart