Birdsong Jan29 by Mark M. Redfearn Imagine the sound, wee wren, of one hand clapping to silence your song. Related Post navigation ← Cicada Early → 9 comments on “Birdsong” JazzBumpa says: January 29, 2013 at 7:49 pm More than 50 years ago, when we were teenagers, one of my friends made this up, and somehow I still remember it. Now this may sound absurd, But the sound of my favorite bird Never has been heard It’s the song of the dead robin After it’s ceased it’s sobbin’ And his heart’s no longer throbbin’ My esthete can stand this diet Of beauty that’s gone riot ‘Cause the damned thing’s finally quiet! Cheers! JzB Reply Gemma Wiseman says: January 29, 2013 at 11:25 pm The “one hand clapping” reference reminds me of the novel by that title! so this becomes an interesting layered haiku for me! Reply WabiSabi says: January 30, 2013 at 5:30 am I pray that no hand ever silences the wee wren! Reply Chevrefeuille says: January 30, 2013 at 6:06 am Nice take on birdsong, but I hope that birds keep on singing their song unless hand clapping. 🙂 Reply 4joy says: January 30, 2013 at 11:18 am echoes of a koan….made for deep meditation….lovely Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: January 30, 2013 at 1:15 pm This left me thinking a lot. But I prefer to let the wee wren sing. Reply Peripatetic Eric says: January 30, 2013 at 4:05 pm One hand clapping, the song and everything is gone. Reply Look for A Lovely Thing says: January 30, 2013 at 6:04 pm Made me smile. I am just learning about the one hand clapping… Reply annieelf2012 says: January 30, 2013 at 8:06 pm Imagine, wee wren , the sound of one hand clapping but be sure to continue a sweet chirp as you listen. Reply Leave a comment Cancel reply Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
More than 50 years ago, when we were teenagers, one of my friends made this up, and somehow I still remember it.
Now this may sound absurd,
But the sound of my favorite bird
Never has been heard
It’s the song of the dead robin
After it’s ceased it’s sobbin’
And his heart’s no longer throbbin’
My esthete can stand this diet
Of beauty that’s gone riot
‘Cause the damned thing’s finally quiet!
Cheers!
JzB
The “one hand clapping” reference reminds me of the novel by that title! so this becomes an interesting layered haiku for me!
I pray that no hand ever silences the wee wren!
Nice take on birdsong, but I hope that birds keep on singing their song unless hand clapping. 🙂
echoes of a koan….made for deep meditation….lovely
This left me thinking a lot. But I prefer to let the wee wren sing.
One hand clapping, the song and everything is gone.
Made me smile. I am just learning about the one hand clapping…
Imagine, wee wren , the sound of one hand clapping but be sure to continue a sweet chirp as you listen.