8 comments on “Shrine”

  1. Lolly says:
    February 10, 2013 at 9:51 am

    Brilliant!

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  2. CreativitytotheMax says:
    February 10, 2013 at 11:25 am

    I admit I had to look up “keens” and when I did your haiku blew me away. Brilliant from me too.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:
    February 10, 2013 at 1:44 pm

    Very poignant.

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  4. jazzbumpa says:
    February 10, 2013 at 4:10 pm

    Sad gory flowers
    Wailing like wounded banshees
    Cry for redemption

    JzB

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  5. Meenakshi Malhotra says:
    February 11, 2013 at 6:32 am

    Breathtaking! what a take on the prompt!

    Shades of Red

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  6. Rallentanda says:
    February 11, 2013 at 4:29 pm

    Very appropriate haiku for Lent.

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  7. ElizOF says:
    February 13, 2013 at 6:15 am

    Ah…. this made me stop. Poignant yet beautiful

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  8. WabiSabi says:
    February 16, 2013 at 7:22 am

    This is one I wish I had written! And I almost missed it!

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