long forgotten—
three brown wooden buttons
under the rug
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Forgotten
long forgotten—
three brown wooden buttons
under the rug
long forgotten—
three brown wooden buttons
under the rug
Mark M. Redfearn 
Sometimes under the rugs can be found quite useful things, even if long forgotten 🙂
Where did they come from, these buttons? Needful things.
They were forgotten so long ago, nobody knows!
and my renk response would be:
loneliness with open fly
he drinks remaining stale beer
couldn’t help it.
I mean renku
Oh, I thought you meant “rank”! Hahaha!
A renku could be rank
Yes, I suppose it could! 🙂
quite a visual, Bjorn!
barefoot walker
stumbles on this lost treasure
bruises instep
Cheers!
JzB
Nice take on the haiku by Jane. Great imagery of joy.
Mysterious… I love it!
Yes, I think this really has the feel of the inspiration haiku, and many a house has this environmental issue!
I love how your mind went to this place from JR’s haiku. Wonderful! Lots of lost forgotten things in all kinds of nooks and crannies.
I read this first before readingthe promt, the brown buttons somehow take on a different quality omce you know the original prompt was about a brook as well as something hidden. Nice one Mark.
those forgotten buttons from that old coat which is now stowed at the back of the cupboard, button-less.
Buttonless, but held together by safety pins when the owner ventures out on wintry days!
on wintry days
he ventures out
in his coat
held together by pins
shivering a bit
but still warm..
Thanks for sharing a though-provoking haiku.
lovely words…nice lines!
at least you have only buttons under the rug…..
That’s what I thought 🙂
As opposed to snakes, centipedes and other slithery things?
Where they discovered later?