Silent Aug17 by Mark M. Redfearn dead stars—louder than a silent heart Related Post navigation ← Rebozo Longing → 9 comments on “Silent” Cathy Tenzo says: August 18, 2013 at 4:01 pm I really like this and it works very nicely as a one-line haiku. Reply howanxious says: August 18, 2013 at 4:02 pm Ah! Splendid writing. Says so much in the silence of these words. Reply tigerbrite says: August 18, 2013 at 4:26 pm dead stars have no light a silent heart brings nothing to infinity Reply jazzbumpa says: August 18, 2013 at 4:39 pm ancient sine waves pulsing on forever though the source is cold Cheers! JzB Reply Maggie Grace says: August 21, 2013 at 8:51 pm Awesome…can mean so much! Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: August 24, 2013 at 7:59 am I think this is perfect Mark. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: August 24, 2013 at 3:51 pm An awesome one-line haiku Mark Reply siggiofmaine says: September 8, 2013 at 9:29 pm Like this one lineer…thought provoking Peace Siggi Reply Belinda Broughton says: January 28, 2014 at 1:44 pm wonderful Reply Leave a comment Cancel reply Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
I really like this and it works very nicely as a one-line haiku.
Ah! Splendid writing. Says so much in the silence of these words.
dead stars have no light
a silent heart brings nothing
to infinity
ancient sine waves
pulsing on forever
though the source is cold
Cheers!
JzB
Awesome…can mean so much!
I think this is perfect Mark.
An awesome one-line haiku Mark
Like this one lineer…thought provoking
Peace
Siggi
wonderful