The garden pool dark
after releasing the moon—
I light a lantern.
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Pool
The garden pool dark
after releasing the moon—
I light a lantern.
Mark M. Redfearn 
Nice response to the prompt! 🙂
That lantern must produce an ethereal glow.. Nicely set!
This is very sensual — I can totally feel the darkness and the light. Nice!
Are you hoping to lure the moon back? Nicely done!
as the lantern shine
the moon plays peek-a-boo
in the shadowed pool
I loved your take
a practical solution…
Well balanced haiku with a mystical sphere … awesome.
i imagine a night gathering…happiness.
I like this one so much, I’ve decided to include it on my blog tomorrow as part of a weekly haiku review. Would you like to tell me anything more about this poem, your process, or about yourself?
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