My grandfather’s watch—
not a tick for fifty years,
yet my heart keeps time.
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Timekeeper
My grandfather’s watch—
not a tick for fifty years,
yet my heart keeps time.
Mark M. Redfearn 
A silent clock can still be precious.
So sweet 🙂
Beautiful —
But is it haiku? 😉
On Sun, Nov 30, 2014 at 5:00 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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The more I learn about haiku the less qualified I feel to answer that question! o.O
I understand exactly what you mean! I guess the only answer is: Keep writing.
On Sun, Nov 30, 2014 at 6:15 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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Yup! 😉
Beautiful moment of holding a treasure and memories flowing.
lovely.
Oh, yes!
A precious timepiece indeed…as for haiku, fits the 5-7-5 syllable form at least.
At least! 😉
On Mon, Dec 1, 2014 at 9:36 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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A beauty Mark … a nice way to respond on our prompt.