6 comments on “Breeze

  1. Delightful rush of zingy feeling in this beautiful haiku!

  2. WabiSabi says:

    You captured the soul of Shiki’s haiku in this one!

  3. Nicely done Mark. Just like Shiki.

  4. artmusedog says:

    Ah, can feel that spring breeze ~ well penned haiku ~

    (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

  5. Great to skip the peacock and focus on the spring breeze.

  6. 4joy says:

    looking forward to feeling that warm breeze and to see that flower …

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