Moon in my wineglass—
no matter how deep I drink,
it stays out of reach.
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Wineglass
Moon in my wineglass—
no matter how deep I drink,
it stays out of reach.
Mark M. Redfearn 
I really like this haiku Mark. Just out of reach …
Or maybe you like it just because of the word “moon”? (I’m kidding, of course. Thanks for your kind words.)
On Mon, Jul 7, 2014 at 7:12 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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Oh so beautiful… the wish to reach it reflects in your haiku so beautifully!!
Wonderful. You have captured the true feeling of this Haiku.
Melanie
I wonder if there are ‘cork’ readers like ‘tea leaf’ readers… Well that is if you were lucky enough to get a cork in your bottle these days…
Imbibing in moderation is supposed to be quite healthy – even if we cannot reach the moon, maybe we can be luck enough to obtain a few of our dreams in our ‘golden’ years 🙂
falling for autumn
fun haiku and yet a contemplative edge to it ~ very creative ~ thanks, ^_^
artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
I enjoyed this haiku…the first time I smiled, the second time it made me think…that’s a good thing:)
An excellent haiku as always Mark. Cheers to you!
well captured!
oh, this is great Mark. (it’s difficult to swallow the moon)
Great Haiku. Moon and a Wine Glass… perfect way to end the day. Cheers. : )
Very philosophical Mark! Not all things desired one gets to own or achieve! How true!
Hank
This is really beautiful, very observant … the moon in a puddle, on on a lake or a glass of wine is always impossible to touch.
This wonderful … you turn the unknown moon into a known which cannot be reached … chapeau!
WoW… you took a few words and made a wonderful observation that took me to WoW at first reading.!
Thank you
Peace
Siggi