10 comments on “Sun

  1. So poignant and powerful. I can see her.

  2. Jen says:

    Love this, Mark – you can feel the sun on her face. 🙂

  3. Wow! I can feel the warmth on her face beaming.

  4. That really is very good, Mark…must stop reading yours before writing mine..

  5. janicead says:

    in thanks for the sound of coins
    rattling into her cup

    Does not even come close to the beauty in your haiku.

  6. this is wonderful, Mark 🙂

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