summer sun—
blind beggar woman
lifts her face
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Sun
summer sun—
blind beggar woman
lifts her face
summer sun—
blind beggar woman
lifts her face
Mark M. Redfearn 
So poignant and powerful. I can see her.
Love this, Mark – you can feel the sun on her face. 🙂
So powerful!
Wow! I can feel the warmth on her face beaming.
That really is very good, Mark…must stop reading yours before writing mine..
I know what you mean: I try to refrain from reading others before I write mine too!
On Wed, Jul 8, 2015 at 7:19 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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in thanks for the sound of coins
rattling into her cup
Does not even come close to the beauty in your haiku.
That’s kind of you, Janice. Thank you.
On Wed, Jul 8, 2015 at 2:53 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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this is wonderful, Mark 🙂
powerful!