Fragile little bird,
trembling in my hand,
will you find your way back home?
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Fragile
Fragile little bird,
trembling in my hand,
will you find your way back home?
Mark M. Redfearn 
Wonderfully composed haiku (in Kanshicho-style 🙂 ). I like the imagery you have painted here. Thank you for being part in Carpe Diem.
This creates such a clear story in my minds eye.
Tiny birds do seem so fragile when they are up close. I love your use of the word trembling. Very effective.
very nice write
The bird…the trembling…the uncertainty—you keep me in suspense!
Desert Home
positive, yes.
your line lingers.