In vanishing ink
she sketches circles of light,
while Samson goes blind.
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Circles
In vanishing ink
she sketches circles of light,
while Samson goes blind.
Mark M. Redfearn 
Oh my, there are so many ways to read this. I am too tired to figure it out…. can I come back tomorrow?:)
You’re always welcome here, even if there’s nothing to figure out. Sometimes poetry is simply an enigma to be savored! 😉
I’m savoring that enigma!
She sketches
circles of light;
vanishing ink..
I liked it a lot hence tried to capture the way I saw it… Couldn’t relate to the third line..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/10/her-trembling-handshaiku.html
She…is that Ms de liner?
I would imagine so!
Very contemplative haiku ~ 3rd line has major impact at first ~ Happy Weekend to you ~ ^_^
light and darkness.,,,flows nicely
Thank you for the brain work. It made my mind play…and sketch circle of light.
Happy Friday !
lovely &
yes
this—-> an enigma to be savored …
i feel that to be true
Here
& in my own writings …
sometimes the words ~marry*up~
secretly
behind their meanings,
i do believe
I’m wondering how Delilah was able to sketch circles of light and not darkness, given her role in Samson’s life. Intriguing haiku, Mark.
fascinating and beautiful way to express this age old tale.
Delilah. Thy name is …. ________. Anyone, fill the gap?
Wait. I’m still looking for the superlike button to click.
Sorry, I disabled the “Like” button several weeks ago. Just one of those things…
So, you disabled the “Like” button? Now I see why I cannot “like” these on FB. I have been trying to figure it out. I do enjoy everything you write, Mark, just so you know. I can’t even figure out how to like them on here, but thought I would let you know that I see them on FB. Sorry I am so computer illiterate :=(
the sun a circle of light can blind…
Beautiful and intriguing … nice take on circle.
WOW…unique take on the prompt…Love it
Peace
Siggi
Oh, to sketch circles of light, sounds heavenly, until the last line, why does there always have to be consequences?
Well, isn’t that life? 😉
Delilahtful 🙂
amazing how that can happen in the very same moment.
one womans circle is another mans sight.
Basking in the enigma 🙂