down a steep decline
brown donkey picking her way
hoof by unshod hoof
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Donkey
down a steep decline
brown donkey picking her way
hoof by unshod hoof
Mark M. Redfearn 
Nice image portrayed here. A sure-footed donkey I bet.
interesting use of the word decline! loved the haiku 🙂
Decline: a downward slope or declivity.
yeah i know….just this meaning didn’t strike me when I looked at the prompt 🙂
Sometimes words hardly get used in certain ways. “Decline” (as I’ve used it) is one of them! 😉
On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 11:00 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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hoof by unshod hoof
donkey descends steep decline
it felt so inclined
Yes, it did! 😉
On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 11:07 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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I like the imagery that comes from “brown donkey picking her way” –nice!
Oh, I like this one! Such a great image and so skillfully drawn.
Imaginative…
Could envision!!!
Nice…
I can see the poor donkey!
Very nice use of the word “decline” . Am picturing the unshod donkey slowing picking her way.
This is vivid and nicely picturized … loved it 🙂