the last smoky notes
fading from her husky voice—
blues café at dawn
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Smoky
the last smoky notes
fading from her husky voice—
blues café at dawn
Mark M. Redfearn 
Love that blues!!
Beautiful..
sublime
Wow … a wonderful scene Mark and so in the mood of the blues … I can almost feel that smoky air of a blues cafe …
Excellent Haiku. I loved it.
Melanie
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I love this so much!
This is so good it took my breath away. Can feel that smoke & environment.
Wonderful Mark ~ definitely can see the smoke and feel the bluesy cafe!
artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
Nice !
ahhhh! the essence of blues! 🙂
I can smell the cigarette smoke just reading your haiku. Beautiful.
bravo!!!
Reminds me of the song ‘Lola’
http://www.kindakinks.net/discography/showsong.php?song=219
by Ray Davies
But also I can imagine someone like Ella Fitzgerald.
Really nice stage scene you’ve set.
Perfect one Mark.. love it
This is real nice ……… blues!.
This is lovely haiku!!