Slums Feb6 by Mark M. Redfearn finding my lost son under a blue sombrero in Tijuana’s slums Related Post navigation ← Worms Icebreaker → 13 comments on “Slums” artmusedog says: February 6, 2015 at 7:22 am ooh I can see that blue sombrero ~ lovely penned haiku ~ Happy weekend to you, artmusedog and carol Reply rebecca says: February 6, 2015 at 9:10 am a father and son the sweetness of reunion turns the sky true blue Reply Lea says: February 6, 2015 at 9:35 am To find what has been lost is indeed a treasure. Reply judie says: February 6, 2015 at 10:15 am Hope he wanted to be found. That makes it really nice. Reply Annie says: February 6, 2015 at 11:01 am I visited Tijuana often in the early 70’s. Your haiku brought that time period to vivid life. Reply gemma says: February 6, 2015 at 11:10 am That he was found gives us hope. Reply Hamish 'Managua' Gunn says: February 6, 2015 at 1:00 pm Extraordinary haiku. Opens up a myriad of stories Reply jazzbumpa says: February 6, 2015 at 1:44 pm wow namaste jzb Reply CarpeDiemhaikumeme (@CarpeDiemhaiku) says: February 6, 2015 at 6:06 pm Great response on our “play-again” prompt Mark. I hope this haiku isn’t based on reality, was your son really lost? Reply adaspoetryalcove says: February 6, 2015 at 7:57 pm Wonderfully written haiku! Reply Rallentanda says: February 7, 2015 at 7:49 am Liked the mood of this…disturbing but real ! Reply Cheryl-Lynn says: February 7, 2015 at 1:27 pm a lucky son indeed. Reply Laura Hegfield says: February 7, 2015 at 6:01 pm sad and beautiful. Reply Leave a reply to jazzbumpa Cancel reply Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
ooh I can see that blue sombrero ~ lovely penned haiku ~
Happy weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol
a father and son
the sweetness of reunion
turns the sky true blue
To find what has been lost is indeed a treasure.
Hope he wanted to be found. That makes it really nice.
I visited Tijuana often in the early 70’s. Your haiku brought that time period to vivid life.
That he was found gives us hope.
Extraordinary haiku. Opens up a myriad of stories
wow
namaste
jzb
Great response on our “play-again” prompt Mark. I hope this haiku isn’t based on reality, was your son really lost?
Wonderfully written haiku!
Liked the mood of this…disturbing but real !
a lucky son indeed.
sad and beautiful.