toward a stand of pines
three raven feathers drifting
drifting in the wind
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Drifting
toward a stand of pines
three raven feathers drifting
drifting in the wind
Mark M. Redfearn 
I like the gracefulness I’m picturing of the feathers drifting…
very nice, I like the repetitiveness.
three raven feathers…what was that raven up to, I wonder 🙂
luv the rhythm created by the repetition
much love…
An interesting story suggested in this haiku 🙂
A nicely penned mystery.
Feathers drifting on the wind …. wow …. what a scene. Nice repetition.
Beautiful image …. and I agree the repetition created a great atmosphere.