Play Aug4 by Mark M. Redfearn from Dachau’s ovens the play of light and shadow on a dove’s left wing Related Post navigation ← Rainfall Zero → 14 comments on “Play” Forest Tinker (@hamish_gunn) says: August 4, 2015 at 1:17 pm Almost too powerful, or is – quite thunderstruck. Really you have quite a range in haiku writing, and I suddenly realise that is the difference… Reply Chèvrefeuille says: August 4, 2015 at 1:45 pm Wow! What to say more Mark. Very strong scene with a strong emotional layer. Thank you for this beauty. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: August 4, 2015 at 1:45 pm Reblogged this on Chèvrefeuille's haiku. Reply Nonnie USA says: August 4, 2015 at 2:51 pm oh, my- this one nearly knocked me out of my seat with the emotion it evoked from me Reply Candy says: August 4, 2015 at 5:33 pm peace and war in so few words – so powerful Reply Bastet says: August 4, 2015 at 10:53 pm Sigh … a beautiful poetic image from the ashes of Dachau … would you mind if I reblogged this on my page? Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 5, 2015 at 1:37 am Go right ahead. Thanks! On Tue, Aug 4, 2015 at 10:53 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Bastet says: August 5, 2015 at 8:59 am Thanks very much … Reply Bastet says: August 5, 2015 at 8:55 am Reblogged this on Bastet and Sekhmet's Library and commented: A moving haiku … a beautiful image from the horror of the Holocaust … in Italian we say … roses sprout not from jewals but from mud … here beauty has sprouted from ashes. Reply readinpleasure says: August 5, 2015 at 9:58 am Speechless! 🙂 Reply Oliana says: August 5, 2015 at 4:09 pm It feels like I got the wind got knocked out of me, reading this several times! Reply adaspoetryalcove says: August 5, 2015 at 7:14 pm Beautifully done! Reply Jen says: August 5, 2015 at 9:06 pm I don’t know what to say, Mark — absolutely speechless —- Reply jazzytower says: August 8, 2015 at 10:27 pm Powerful commentary! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.