10 comments on “Offerings”

  1. HaikuWater says:
    June 29, 2012 at 6:26 am

    I can easily imagine an itinerant Zen monk writing this haiku.

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  2. Karen says:
    June 29, 2012 at 7:54 am

    I hope this is offering was for the birds and wasn’t your breakfast!

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  3. gemma says:
    June 29, 2012 at 9:02 am

    Thank you! We are blessed.

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  4. 4joy says:
    June 29, 2012 at 2:28 pm

    Are you now being punished with bread and water breakfasts? I hope not….Your haiku paints a still life so well

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  5. Chèvrefeuille says:
    June 29, 2012 at 7:40 pm

    This is a wonderful haiku. I love the deeper meaning in it. To me it brought joy and did remember me a koan I once read.
    Namaste

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  6. Spadoman says:
    June 30, 2012 at 3:18 am

    Prison? Or Communion? Either way, it is the body and blood.

    Peace

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  7. Grace says:
    June 30, 2012 at 5:11 am

    You painted a clear and lovely image here ~ Well done ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/06/morning-walk.html

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  8. Irene says:
    July 3, 2012 at 4:29 pm

    i think of birds landing on a branch delighted to find what someone left for them.

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  9. rebecca says:
    July 3, 2012 at 9:33 pm

    immediately i am in the monastery.

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